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(my brother likes the second one better, but I couldn't not put in the first one, it was too cool.)
Mr.
Weapon Man 2
Once
upon a time, there was a man named Jacob. He didn’t have all the weapons in the
entire world, like Mr. Weapon Man did. But then Mr. Weapon Man joined Jacob’s
army and then they had a battle against General Grievous. But they finally
found something that they didn’t know what it was. And they finally found out
what it was. It was the biggest treasure on earth. And then they sold the
treasure for ships and stuff for their armies, and then they battled against
five more armies and won all five. Then they had the best battle to fight
against the best team (other people think…), and they won, because we had the
biggest treasure, and the most items ever! The planes were made of gold and don’t
blow up, and don’t get dents and had a lot of weapons on them, thanks to Mr.
Weapon Man. And then they had a lighthouse, which Mr. Weapon Man had in it’s
place. He was covered with weapons, and Jacob was also covered in weapons, like
Mr. Weapon Man because Mr. Weapon Man gave them to him. And then they had a
million ships, planes, subs, cars with a lot of weapons on them. Everyone on
the team had weapons, and lots of them. Now they had the final battle and they
won!! But it wasn’t a very good battle. A quarter of the army died, and they
found the biggest treasure in the entire galaxy. It was too amazing for words. Mr.
Weapon Man said “what are we gonna do with three quarters of an army when the
final battle came up, and we won, but a quarter of the army died!?” Jacob said “we
did win, but, but should we do with all the empty ships?” Mr. Weapon Man said “I
don’t know, but we should get more men, maybe…” And then they built an Iron man
suit, and got more men by blowing things up, and then everyone had an Iron Man
suit, and it was awesome!
The
End.
Written
by Rachel, story as told by David
What'd you think? I'd told my brother I would read all the comments on this post to him, so make him happy, kay?

David!- You are so creative! =D I will definitely know it is winter when there is no food ;) ;) I would also like to see a golden plane sometime! I had fun reading your story:)
ReplyDeleteKeep it up!
David says: I'm writing a 3rd story.
DeleteDavid- great job! Are you planning on writing anymore stories?
ReplyDeleteRachel- congrats for 100! Gahh, I'll email you with those pictures soon!
David says: Yes.
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